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Redraft with line-by-line script analysis 



Get a detailed report on your script, from a producer who’s worked on major projects with the BBC, Film4, the BFI, and more.  



After reading your screenplay, Carl Schoenfeld will send you a one- to two-page report including a synopsis of your story and professional commentary. He’ll provide feedback on: 




  • The premise 

  • The storyline and structure 

  • Characterisation and dialogue 

  • The pacing 

  • Potential audience and industry appeal 



After this report, you’ll have a one-to-one session with Carl to discuss the feedback in detail and compare his comments with your creative intentions. 



In this session, Carl will also help develop a plan to make the script more compelling – and to find filmmakers who might connect with your project. 



How long does it last? 



After receiving the written feedback, you have the choice if either a one-hour session with Carl, or a version of the script with comments and suggestions.  



Where does it take place? 



Zoom. We run all our sessions online, to make them as accessible as possible. 

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