Redraft with line-by-line script analysis
Get a detailed report on your script, from a producer who’s worked on major projects with the BBC, Film4, the BFI, and more.
After reading your screenplay, Carl Schoenfeld will send you a one- to two-page report including a synopsis of your story and professional commentary. He’ll provide feedback on:
After this report, you’ll have a one-to-one session with Carl to discuss the feedback in detail and compare his comments with your creative intentions.
In this session, Carl will also help develop a plan to make the script more compelling – and to find filmmakers who might connect with your project.
How long does it last?
After receiving the written feedback, you have the choice if either a one-hour session with Carl, or a version of the script with comments and suggestions.
Where does it take place?
Zoom. We run all our sessions online, to make them as accessible as possible.